From deviantArt
Mar. 22nd, 2011 12:27 amhttp://fav.me/d39sdno
>Struggling for somewhere to look, for something to say or do, eyes of brilliant azure drew to a stain, amorphous and varnished into the heavy stone - no larger than a flannel's breadth - and dark enough to be.
>Shuffling clumsily and handling the stale stone how a mutt treasures its favourite toy in the aftermath of an epic tug-battle.
I like how they manage to write several paragraphs with a lot more words than usual, but without a single action verb.
>Struggling for somewhere to look, for something to say or do, eyes of brilliant azure drew to a stain, amorphous and varnished into the heavy stone - no larger than a flannel's breadth - and dark enough to be.
>Shuffling clumsily and handling the stale stone how a mutt treasures its favourite toy in the aftermath of an epic tug-battle.
I like how they manage to write several paragraphs with a lot more words than usual, but without a single action verb.